That's right, folks. I'm talking about outlining.
I have nothing against pantsing or discovery writing but there are many misconceptions regarding those of us who choose to outline our novels.
I'm going to address one of these misconceptions:
I have nothing against pantsing or discovery writing but there are many misconceptions regarding those of us who choose to outline our novels.
I'm going to address one of these misconceptions:
Outlines are too restrictive.
Some people think that by outlining or planning your story, you stifle the creative process. You keep yourself from discovering anything new and fail to surprise yourself.
Let me tell you right now, that is just plain wrong.
I'll say it again, outlining does NOT mean predictable.
OUTLINING DOES NOT STIFLE CREATIVITY. IT DOES NOT SILENCE YOUR MUSE.
But don't take it just from me, here are a few examples from some fellow bloggers and friends who outline their stories.
In their own words:
Teebore said:
In Fate Lost, two characters who, according to my outline, weren't going to become romantically involved (in fact, I made a point of noting they wouldn't) ending up getting romantically involved as I wrote the story, as it just made sense for the characters as I was writing them.
Summer said:
Well, actually yesterday I veered from my outline because what I'd planned for the chapter was fairly dull and I really wanted to move the story a great jump forward into the Act 2 climax, so I winged it by taking the final bit of the chapter's outline and starting there. Then I followed the logical conclusion and spent the rest of the chapter building up character conflicts and setting them up for the end-of-chapter reveal, plus another little peg in an anti-character corkboard (don't ask me to explain what that means). It turned out far, far better than the original would have, for sure.
Sarah said:
In Glimpse of Another Shore, I have a scene with Pier where I needed another character to make a comment to him regarding an important piece of his character/plot, to build believability.
So I made up a character on the spot, Captain Kinney. He had a conversation with Pier, and I got what I needed from him. I thought that was the last time I'd see Captain Kinney.
But nope, he showed up again to offer Pier a job. Then he showed up later when Pier confronted him about a secret. Later he has Pier's back in a fight.
By the end of the novel, We find out Captain Kinney is actually an important man and he helps hold the plot together.
He's an important, and entertaining, character, and the only reason he showed up at all was because I just needed a filler character. Not only was he not written into my outline, without him, the plot wouldn't function well.
It sure as hell surprised me when, not only did he stick around, he ends up being super important in this book, but also the plans I have for the sequel.
My most recent example is:
At one point, I created a completely new character. It wasn't planned, she just showed up in mid-type but she is now extremely important to the torturing of my main character.
Also, one of my main characters revealed a secret he knew about another. He had kept this secret even from me.
There are so many different types of outlining, as well.
Fiction matters boils it down to three types. They are not all extremely detailed and as long as books themselves.
Let me tell you right now, that is just plain wrong.
I'll say it again, outlining does NOT mean predictable.
OUTLINING DOES NOT STIFLE CREATIVITY. IT DOES NOT SILENCE YOUR MUSE.
But don't take it just from me, here are a few examples from some fellow bloggers and friends who outline their stories.
In their own words:
Teebore said:
In Fate Lost, two characters who, according to my outline, weren't going to become romantically involved (in fact, I made a point of noting they wouldn't) ending up getting romantically involved as I wrote the story, as it just made sense for the characters as I was writing them.
Summer said:
Well, actually yesterday I veered from my outline because what I'd planned for the chapter was fairly dull and I really wanted to move the story a great jump forward into the Act 2 climax, so I winged it by taking the final bit of the chapter's outline and starting there. Then I followed the logical conclusion and spent the rest of the chapter building up character conflicts and setting them up for the end-of-chapter reveal, plus another little peg in an anti-character corkboard (don't ask me to explain what that means). It turned out far, far better than the original would have, for sure.
Sarah said:
In Glimpse of Another Shore, I have a scene with Pier where I needed another character to make a comment to him regarding an important piece of his character/plot, to build believability.
So I made up a character on the spot, Captain Kinney. He had a conversation with Pier, and I got what I needed from him. I thought that was the last time I'd see Captain Kinney.
But nope, he showed up again to offer Pier a job. Then he showed up later when Pier confronted him about a secret. Later he has Pier's back in a fight.
By the end of the novel, We find out Captain Kinney is actually an important man and he helps hold the plot together.
He's an important, and entertaining, character, and the only reason he showed up at all was because I just needed a filler character. Not only was he not written into my outline, without him, the plot wouldn't function well.
It sure as hell surprised me when, not only did he stick around, he ends up being super important in this book, but also the plans I have for the sequel.
My most recent example is:
At one point, I created a completely new character. It wasn't planned, she just showed up in mid-type but she is now extremely important to the torturing of my main character.
Also, one of my main characters revealed a secret he knew about another. He had kept this secret even from me.
There are so many different types of outlining, as well.
Fiction matters boils it down to three types. They are not all extremely detailed and as long as books themselves.

I utilized the Snowflake Method for my last MS. I'll talk about that more on Wednesday.
ProWriting Tips gives 5 reasons why some of us choose to outline.
1. Establish clear motives.
2. Separate major plot from minor plot
3. Spot plot consistencies before they pop up
4. Enhance foreshadowing
5. Keep your story on track.
Of course, that doesn't mean if you outline, you will have none of these problems but like all things writing related, it takes practice.
Again this does not mean that discovery writing or pantsing is ineffective; always do what works for you.
But please, don't think that by choosing to outline, you're killing your Muse or stuffing him in a box and telling him what he can or cannot eat.
You can never force your story to do anything and if you are, shame on you. ;)
Wednesday, I'll talk about the Snowflake Method and how I utilized it.

I know you can't wait. ;)
So what about you? What are your feelings towards outlining? If you had negative feelings, does this open your eyes??
I always outline - I need a path to follow and a target to hit.
ReplyDeleteI'm an outliner too. If I don't, I flounder aimlessly. I like having a start and a destination. Although, like you say, anything can come up in between.
ReplyDeleteLOVE THIS!!
ReplyDeleteI'm one that is a panster, however that doesn't mean I don't slightly outline before I begin. I make a few comments on a sheet of paper before I begin that way if I lose my focus I can pick it back up.
That being said my real outlining doesn't happen until AFTER I've written the first draft. I like letting my characters take me on a wild goose chase. Though it stinks for revisions the system works so I stick with what I know and what I like!
I love outlining. It really helps me make sure I know where I'm going. I think it saves me time and wasted effort. And like the examples you cited, it's easy to still be spontaneous. Great post!
ReplyDeleteI'm using an outline for my current WIP. So far, I like it. I wrote out the scenes on index cards and taped them to my wall. This way I can mark them off when I'm done to have a visual reminder of how much I've accomplished.
ReplyDeleteI also like outlining for some of the same reasons mentioned in your post. It revealed twists, character motivation, and weakness in the plot.
Yeah, I've tried, but I veer from it immediately. Also, when I have a character in my head and a their story to tell, my brain and fingers are itching to GET WRITING and taking the time to outline is something I don't seem to have the patience for.
ReplyDeleteBUT, that said, I think my first draft is sort of a big outline. It helps me get the bones down and feel for the story I need to tell...and most importantly, by the end of my first draft I KNOW my characters well.
The downside to my method is, naturally, it's riddles with plenty o' plot holes and slop.
I am, however, learning to use some outlining methods for revisions, before beginning the second draft.
I think we all have a different process and it's trial and error and lots of practice to learn what works for us.
Hugs,
Lola
I'm a recovering pantser.
ReplyDeleteAll the problems in my WiP convinced me I need a better way. For my next project I will have a plot skeleton in place to help guide me away from huge holes as I write. And I will know as much as possible about all major and secondary characters - especially what they want and what's keeping them from getting it.
I'm not afraid of anything that may occur after I start writing because I'll have the outline to keep me from going too far afield.
Never again do I want to completely rewire the whole project from lack of planning.
I outline the plot, the goal, and character motives for each scene and that is as FAR as I go. My best chapters have been "surprise, I'm gonna do what I want," or "here's a twist." My characters like to have fun and I let them guide me. The outline is so I merely don't stray from the main goal, and if I detour it's for a really good reason now whereas before I would just go someplace else for no reason. I agree that the outline is not going to lessen the muse. AT ALL!
ReplyDeleteI wasn't even aware there were people that thought that. I've only written the one novel, but I couldn't have done it without the outline, however loose it was.
ReplyDeleteWell, clearly, I'm pro-outline and anti-pants, so I won't get into all that again.
ReplyDeleteBut please, don't think that by choosing to outline, you're killing your Muse or stuffing him in a box and telling him what he can or cannot eat.
Or, outlining doesn't mean you make your Muse see five lights when there's really four. ;)
I kinda did both. First draft I did by the seat of my pants because I had no idea what I was going to write, just a crazy idea. It was so bad, in fact, some of it didn't make sense. Then I outlined. I'm kinda doing it as I go, then the next time through I'll have a better understanding and will have a completed outline to build on. Right or wrong, it seems to be working.
ReplyDeleteI love outlines! And I don't think they are restrictive at all. In fact they keep my novel from running off all wild and crazy. My process: Have a summary of what happens in each scene, broken down by the beg, mid, and end of the scene. The exact dialogue and description, etc is written freely.
ReplyDeleteThis is such a great post! I outline, too, and I completely agree that it doesn't stifle the muse at all. I often veer from my outline because of new ideas or directions, so it certainly is not as rigid as some people might think it is. I don't think that just because I have an outline in front of me that I have to stick to it. I'm always changing things and updating my outline as I go along. ;)
ReplyDeleteBy nature I'm a pantser. During NaNoWriMo though, I realised I couldn't write 50,000 words without an outline. So, I took two days out, a large sheet of brown paper and post-it notes, and worked out the plot. But (and this is a big but) the writing I did pre-plot was much, much better than post. I have no idea why.
ReplyDeleteOutlinig does stifle my creativity but maybe that is because I've never written a novel before and I'm still learning the processes involved.
However, I do agree that having an outline does not mean you have to stick to it rigidly. This morning, whilst hoovering the hall, a new character and opening to my novel presented itself. I nearly leapt with joy, because the idea was so simple and effective that I can't think why I didn't see it before!
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ReplyDeleteOutlines are stupid. And I couldn't write without them.
ReplyDeleteInconceivable!
I love that Princess Bride quote. It's awesome.
ReplyDeleteI'm an outliner. To the death!
Good post. In my first book it was all panster, but for my second I have a rough outline. I basically know the main goal of each chapter. Yesterday I worked on chapter 4. I knew what would happen, but I didn't know how I could weave the importance of the overall book into it. Then I was hit over the head by fairy dust. The mess is still on the floor. In short, my protagonist met an elf. Well, not for the first time, but it served its purpose.
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You definitely made a good case for outlining. I actually only use outlines when I'm writing my dissertation; I think that's one reason I shy away from them when I'm writing fiction. I'm afraid I might include quotes from Foucault or Homi Bhabha in my fiction writing, and even though they both work well in academic writing, I think they'd be out of place in a chick lit book. Unless I was writing about a grad student or some other would-be academic. :)
ReplyDeleteI definitely outline AND veer. The best plot points always seem to be the ones that just appear. :)
ReplyDeletefirst off - both the tile of your post AND the picard muse pic had me LMAO! Win.
ReplyDeleteYeah, i mean, let's get serious here. I'm willing to bet that a good 50% of outliners, are recovering pantsers. I know i am. Things just go so much easier for me now that i outline.
And thank god for the first few steps of the snowflake method
I'm with you - I don't find outlines restrictive, and there are so many different kinds. I need to know where my heroine is going - in terms of character development, anyway - or I can't write!
ReplyDeleteHa ha... nice Princess Bride quote... I use it all the time. I love that you're in love with Jean-Luc as I am ... altho, you do realize he is really mine. Muhahahaha...
ReplyDeleteAnyway, this topic is interesting because I know many peeps who never outline. I, for one, am a total outliner. I need to know exactly what I WANT to happen, however, it rarely ever turns out exactly that way. I let my characters take over, but I have to give them a guide to stay on track. Each writer has their own methods, and I've found thru trial and error that knowing the destination saves time and headaches on revisions later.
I loves me an outline. If I didn't have one, I would write in circles. This is why I'm in awe of pansters for sure.
ReplyDeleteMy outlines are pretty flexible though, but it's definitely a plus for me to know where my story is headed and how I will get there.
Great line from the Princess Bride. Love Mandy.
ReplyDeleteI outline as I go along to keep track because I can't think ahead when I write.
I need to do some preplanning. I need to know what I'm writing toward or my prose will not be focused. I change my mind a lot in a 1st draft tho. I do more detailed planning in later drafts.
ReplyDeleteWell said. I've always claimed I can't work by a detailed outline (I like knowing a beginning, middle and end and I like having some idea of who I'll be working with), but the fact is, I tend to rely too heavily on the outline. I am a literal person and when I have that outline, I tend to treat it as law, written-in-stone, ain't-gonna-change-because-this-is-the-WAY-it-is. That did almost kill my last book. If you're going to go by outline, you MUST be willing to deviate from that outline (as your examples all demonstrate) or your story/characters will never become alive. Even Rowlings got drawn up on this in a few places. In order for me to avoid the outline trap, I avoid doing much of an outline. I've probably gone too far with that approach, really, but I'm letting it play out for now. *shrugs* It will all get rewritten anyway, right? ;D
ReplyDeleteI outline, but I don't necessarily stick to it. I followed the snowflake method for my last NaNo novel. I didn't get some of the diagrams but overall it was useful.
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I think you are so right about this. I do a little of both. My outlines consist of the rough plot of my story, character and land names, and other little details I need to look back at from the colors of clothes, to certain ranks and things certain characters know. Then i write, and usually by the climax I need to write down what the characters know, what they need to find out, and when, and the general direction the rest of the story will take. But everyone does it differently, so what may be outlining to me is completely different than outlining for someone else.
ReplyDeleteRestrictive? I made several changes to my outline, and then once I started writing my book's sequel, added many new aspects to my book's sequel. But if I didn't have that blueprint to begin with, God only knows what crap I would've written!
ReplyDeleteAnyone seen a six fingered man??
ReplyDeleteI have a strange mix of the two. I know exactly where the story is going. I know how it starts and I know my characters through and through. And then I just start writing. I pants the whole way to the finish line but because I know the ending, there's actually quite a bit of foreshadowing and hints along the way. This is a great post. I don't like when people think that their way is the only right way. It's the right way for you but that doesn't mean what other people are doing is wrong!
ReplyDeleteJust because you have a GPS doesn't mean you can't take a side road. Same with an outline. It's a map to get you to the end but side trips can be fascinating.
ReplyDelete@Natasha - I've tried doing the index card thing but it hasn't worked for the before outlining. I'm going to try them in my editing and revising process. I'll keep you posted.
ReplyDelete@Erica- I did something similar. I like having an easy going guideline so that when I'm stuck, I can just look at it and say, oh yeah, that's where I was going. And if it doesn't feel right, well, I make something else up. :)
@Elizabeth- Yeah, my last WIP wasn't fully thought out. I don't think I had enough story to make a whole book and I wasn't thorough enough. I get that. I'm glad you found the right balance. I love hearing how other people write or plan their writing. You never know when something might work for you.
@Nia- Yeah, I don't think I've ever written dialogue ahead of time. I entertain myself too much by what comes up along the way! LOL!
@PK- Oh, we can fight for him but I'm going to tell you right now, I'm going to win. ;P
I think people who never outline are amazing! If you can keep all that in your head, or make it up on the fly? More power to you. I'm good at pantsing short stories and flash fiction but never anything of novel length.
@Karen- It's good to have a flexible outline because sometimes things just don't work out how you've planned.
@Melissa- Me too!! I miss him so much. Why couldn't he stay on Criminal Minds/Dead Like Me forever??
There's a short description of the "outline as you go" on one of those links. I've never tried that but I may one day, it sounds like an interesting challenge. Thanks!
I will be doing some form of outlining on my next piece. It will help me focus. I couldn’t read the red writing but I’m sure it was fabulous.
ReplyDelete@Sarah- Yay! I love a win.
ReplyDeleteSo true. I tried pantsing. No good. I'm horrible at it. I'm not very good at outlining yet either but I'll get better with more practice.
Virtual high five for the Snowflake method.
@Holly- Oh! Sorry about that, I fixed it. :D
ReplyDeleteI've pantsed and failed. I am now outlining and winning. Ok, sort of. I am rewriting the beginning. So clearly my outline has room for growth and change, but since I had outlined, I can now see how the chanegs will affect the story later and it becomes clearer what things I can put in or take out now and catch up with or pull out later. That's wordy and confusing, but it is working well for me. :) I definitely need the outline.
ReplyDeleteWell, maybe we're wrong, but I know from experience that too much outlining has made me bored. ;) I can't be wrong when I saw it happen :D
ReplyDeleteStill, I did manage to outline last year's NaNo and keep it relatively on track. if I hadn't, no doubt I'd have a 150k word count instead of my more desirable 80k. :)
Huh! Some food for thought, there. Pantser at heart might be getting bitten by the plot bug, me thinks? ...nah. Not yet! But this is swaying, for sure!
ReplyDeletethere. are. four. lights.
ReplyDeleteWait, I got distracted by the Picard.
I don't outline an entire work, but there are many scenes I work pen and paper before getting to the actual writing. Does that count?
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Let's be friends. Oh wait... we're way past that now I think. When I first started writing, I gave outlines the double middle finger. Now I snuggle with them and call them "my preciousssessssss..." And you're absolutely right, even with an outline there are still plenty of surprises! My final drafts never look anything like my original outline, but they are way better than if I'd tried it sans outline.
ReplyDeleteI'm writing my first novel and I did an extensive outline of the plot and the characters. I love to free write though so I've switched it up a little already. For me outlining keeps me more focused but I won't let it stifle my creativity either.
ReplyDeleteHahaha I love the sight of your crying muse.
ReplyDeleteI used to outline, but Doorways kicked my teeth out when I tried... So I gave up and now have to think on my feet.
Makes it a hundred times more terrifying sometimes, but it works. Believe it or not, the only way to keep the plotlines moving and twisting around each other is to let my brain keep everything in line.
I did create an outline for the 2nd draft, because I didn't want to create more plotholes than what I had at the start.
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Wow, you guys are awesome! I love love love all your comments! Thank you so much for joining in whether you outline or pants it!
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